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17 tips for great copywriting
1) Write with your eraser
You get 100 bucks for every word you rub out from your title:
![Trello landing page](https://s3.amazonaws.com/harrydry/gdmarketing/ctt1.png)
2) Don't exaggerate
An honest line always feels warmer:
![Volkswagon old ads](https://s3.amazonaws.com/harrydry/gdmarketing/ctt2.jpg)
3) No one cares what you can do
Everyone cares what you can do for them.
![Apple iPod original ads](https://s3.amazonaws.com/harrydry/gdmarketing/ctt3.jpg)
4) Avoid the passive voice
It's indirect and awkward:
![Passive voice](https://s3.amazonaws.com/harrydry/gdmarketing/ctt4.png)
5) Don't kill your personality
The best brands feel “real”:
![Andie's CEO email](https://s3.amazonaws.com/harrydry/gdmarketing/ctt11a.png)
6) Avoid “landing page words”
Unlock, unleash, enhance, exceed, empower, supercharge, etc.
Real people don't use them.
![Frontend mentor copywriting](https://s3.amazonaws.com/harrydry/gdmarketing/ctt13.png)
7) Find the tension
“Pleasant” gets forgotten. Conflict creates interest:
![Lemonade landing page copywriting](https://s3.amazonaws.com/harrydry/gdmarketing/ctt12d.png)
8) Write how you talk
Casual. Colloquial. Full of pronouns:
![Basecamps landing page copywriting](https://s3.amazonaws.com/harrydry/gdmarketing/ctt5.png)
9) Avoid “contained” titles
Write something that pulls your reader down your page:
![Zenbu landing page copywriting](https://s3.amazonaws.com/harrydry/gdmarketing/ctt14.png)
10) Write scannable copy
Formatting matters:
![Everyone scans Frank Kern](https://s3.amazonaws.com/harrydry/gdmarketing/ctt6.png)
11) Stories make you memorable
I couldn't list The Ten Commandments. I could tell you what happened to Adam and Eve:
![Adjective and verb tips](https://s3.amazonaws.com/harrydry/gdmarketing/ctt8.png)
12) More periods, fewer commas.
Periods mean short sentences. We like short sentences.
Commas mean long, painful sentences, like this one, which New Yorker writers think are clever, but real people find torturous, because they wind on and on without actually saying anything.
h/t David Perell
13) Kill adverbs. Kill adjectives.
They're flowery. They're vague. They try too hard:
![Adjective and verb tips](https://s3.amazonaws.com/harrydry/gdmarketing/ctt9.png)
14) Think slippery slide
Every line of copy should lead to the next.
Watch this ad. You won't be able to stop:
15) Fence sitters don't buy
Go to the edge:
![Ernest Shackleton copywriting](https://s3.amazonaws.com/harrydry/gdmarketing/ctt7.png)
16) Your first line is crucial
If people don’t read it, they’re not going to read your second line either.
Keep it short:
![Joe Sugarman copywriting](https://s3.amazonaws.com/harrydry/gdmarketing/ctt10.png)
17) Copywriting is selling
Don’t romanticize it. The goal isn't to be clever or cute.
The goal is to inspire action:
![Drift copywriting](https://s3.amazonaws.com/harrydry/gdmarketing/ctt16.png)
You made it!
Damn. This was a long one. I won't lie.
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